Josh13

Hi all here's my published narrative

The Rainforest Adventure

Luke, James and Pete were on a rainforest walk when they saw a baby gorilla. Pete suggested that they could pat it. Luke said, “Let’s try.” They went over to it and started stroking the baby gorilla. It sat down as if to say, “Keep going.” The rainforest they were in was nice and quiet. And had a wide variety of plants and animals.

They kept patting the baby gorilla but they heard a noise. It was a sort of thumping sound, then they realised what it was, and stood up. They looked around, then Pete said, “I think it’s coming from over there.”

“You are right, Pete.” said Luke. Then the mother of baby gorilla appeared on the scene. She bared her teeth as to show lots of anger they ran as fast as they could, she chased them for a long way. They didn’t notice that the mother gorilla had turned back. The only reason why they stopped was. They came to a section where the plants were the same.

“Oh, #@%*!!” said Luke.

“What?” Pete said.

Luke pointed; “This is marijuana.”

“Oh, oh,” James whispered.

Could things get any worse? Yes!

A little squeaky voice snapped, “Turn around slowly, make no sudden movements!”

They turned around and just managed to keep their laughter in. Pointing up towards them was a shotgun. At the end of it stood a tiny little dwarf and three big, drooling and growling bull mastiffs which towered over the dwarf.

“March,” the dwarf squeaked. “These dogs have killed people before. So don’t try to run.’’

They came to a little brick shed.

“In,” he ordered, and in they all went. This shed was quite dark. It had one tiny little window which had metal bars over it and a little table against the wall.

After some time they heard snoring outside the door. It sounded like the dogs. Luke looked at Pete and pointed at four loose bricks under the little table. Pete went over and gave them a gentle push. They came straight out, leaving a nice big hole. One by one they crawled though the opening, being very quiet because of the dogs.

There was a ladder going up to the roof just beside the opening. Quietly they went up the ladder. The roof was actually a helipad. And there was a steel box which they opened. It contained a beacon and a pistol. Luke put the pistol in his pocket and let off the beacon. They waited. An army chopper arrived after a long hour of waiting and took them back to their homes.

The drug squad wanted to catch the dwarf. But they never found him. Even today they don’t know were the dwarf is. The army still flies over where the marijuana used to grow, looking for the dwarf.