Pheynia 8

Hi Everyone here is my narrative

Snowy The Croc In The Jungle
22-9-09


One dark steamy night in a greeny water was a really mean croc laid on the sandy bank .it was silent and still and no movement. There where other animals that needed to drink water but snowy wouldn’t let them snowy was looking for food .Snowy won’t let the animals dink at the river first the bats tried to drink snowy growled at them then the parrots went to get a drink but he snapped at them then the monkeys tried to sneak up behind snowy while he was asleep but o eye was half open snowy jumped up suddenly the animals tired again and again to drink some water but he frightens them away. All the animals called a meeting they decided to make a trap with vines, sticks and put his favorite food in inside, a rabbit that an eagle killed. All the animals told him lye that there was a big fish down river they setted up the trap. They catched him he got a nit quite later the parrots told him they won’t let him out unless he changes he promises not to be mean and everyone becomes friend and snowy let’s them drink at the river.


The End

By Pheynia King